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The Way to Piccadilly
Excuse me, kind sir, this might seem quite silly
But I’ve lost my way, and my mind’s a bit frilly
So if you please, could you tell me the way
The way to Piccadilly, sir
The way to Piccadilly
I’ve come far and wide o’er lands green and hilly
O’er mountains of snow, so icy and chilly
So, sir, if you please to show me the lay
The lay of Piccadilly, sir
The lay of Piccadilly
Yes, I’ve heard tales, from ladies, voiced shrilly
Of fickle and fateful the land of the lily
But sir, kind sir, I would gladly pay
I’d pay for Piccadilly, sir
I’d pay for Piccadilly
One last word, sir, not to seem like a billy
My name is William, but they call me Willy
I’d like a companion, one with me to stray
To stray to Piccadilly, sir
To stray to Piccadilly
If not, sir, I know, one can’t go willy-nilly
I’ll go alone, but find a fine filly
One that will wander, and with me to stay
To stay in Piccadilly, sir
To stay in Piccadilly
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The Butterfly Mondo
Does the butterfly,
Know how high it flutters by?
Can it see the sky?
Indeed it can soar,
Higher o'er both mead and moor,
Can rap at God's door.
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Torturous Tanka
Black mist ‘round my soul
It’s flooding me with sorrow
Thief! My heart you stole!
But did not ask to borrow
So now there’s no tomorrow.
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Financial Crises Senryu
Recession abounds
Everyone is scraping by
No time for others.
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Celestial Sedoka
What about the sun
Whose love, the moon, is chasing
And not reaching him?
The sun does not know
That he is lucky she won’t,
For his love will burn.
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Cloudy Haiku
Clouds make it gloomy
Here comes rain to wash again
Makes the sun rheumy
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Rom-Com Dodoitsu
When my mind is pondering
I like to go wandering
But my clothes need laundering…
And yet I don’t care.
In my room I’m thinking ‘bout
Someone I can’t do without
Though apart I have no doubt
We’re a perfect pair!
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Cheater's Choka
Thou by thy brother
Mine heart an’ soul be wi’ thee
Thou by thy mother
Mine hands shall in welcome be
Thou by another
Mine breath cease to come from me
An’ mine blinded eyes will see
Thou with him dueling
Mine hands folded, I shall pray
Thou with her mewling
Mine heart open, I shall stay
Thou with them ruling
Mine eyes weeping, I shall say:
“Blind was I; from me thou stray!”
Thou with him dying
Mine heart keens to see the shroud
Thou with her sighing
Mine eyes do believe her proud
Thou with them lying
Mine voice shall be heard aloud:
“He let lust his mind to cloud!”
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Mature content
The Soulless Man :iconsagittarianism:Sagittarianism 2 3
How many times must my eyes awash with tears
Before the sun in them will shine?
How many days will turn from weeks into years
Before you'll be forever mine?
I don't know
No, I don't know at all
The time it will take
For God to hear my call.
How many hands must unite in a prayer
Before God will dry up my eyes?
How much weight must my heavy heart bear
Before it just crumbles and dies?
I don't know
No, I don't know at all
If God has ears
Which with to hear my call
How much gold must my pockets contain
Before they can be truly filled?
How much longer will I be in pain
Before too much gets me killed?
I don't know
No, I don't know at all
If God has a heart
With which to feel my call
How can I keep myself free from debt
When all they do is tax every breath?
How can I choose how my fate will be met
When each dollar sign, to me, means Death?
I don't know
No, I don't know at all
If God has two eyes
With which to see me call
How do I move on, improve my own life
If no one will give me a chance
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Blue 'n' Moody
As clouds roll past my head
Things are becoming clear
Now the angry words have all been said,
Those gentle voices I hear
A nightingale plays a dark mellow phrase
But we decide which is right.
To know ultra-violet, infra-red and X-rays,
It's never out of your sight.
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Steampunk City: HRM Queen Victoria 'Tin Type' by Sagittarianism Steampunk City: HRM Queen Victoria 'Tin Type' :iconsagittarianism:Sagittarianism 0 0 Steampunk City: HRM Queen Victoria by Sagittarianism Steampunk City: HRM Queen Victoria :iconsagittarianism:Sagittarianism 1 2 Steampunk City: Pyrotechnic by Sagittarianism Steampunk City: Pyrotechnic :iconsagittarianism:Sagittarianism 1 0 Steampunk City: Juggler on Stilts by Sagittarianism Steampunk City: Juggler on Stilts :iconsagittarianism:Sagittarianism 2 0 Steampunk City: Winged Mechanic by Sagittarianism Steampunk City: Winged Mechanic :iconsagittarianism:Sagittarianism 2 0
The rubbish I create with my own hands and brain... :D


Peafowl romance by dragonheart252 Peafowl romance :icondragonheart252:dragonheart252 2 3 Excuse me, kind Sir,... by cidaq Excuse me, kind Sir,... :iconcidaq:cidaq 101 7 Nubby Ref Sheet by SammichPup Nubby Ref Sheet :iconsammichpup:SammichPup 8 4
Wee Bundles of Joy
I love babies. I really do. They're so cute and soft and that new baby smell is the best. I got to spend some time with my new nephew this week, finally! He's ridiculously adorable and barely even fussed except when he got hungry. He's got the longest fingers I've ever seen on a baby though. I think he'll probably inherit his mom's height lol. All the women in my family are ridiculously tall. Here, have some pictures of the adorableness!

In other news, I go back to school on Monday. I've made a sizable dent in my inbox here, but there are still 3K+ deviations to get through. So I'll make another dent on the break in August lol. Here's a selection of the gorgeous work that was waiting for me all last quarter. Enjoy!
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Not An Embrace by bubug Not An Embrace :iconbubug:bubug 681 40 remembrance by bubug remembrance :iconbubug:bubug 309 5 The Golden Duck by bubug The Golden Duck :iconbubug:bubug 401 30 Style Challenge w/ Kiran by KiranDrawss Style Challenge w/ Kiran :iconkirandrawss:KiranDrawss 13 8 AC badge: White Paw and Scooter by pandapaco AC badge: White Paw and Scooter :iconpandapaco:pandapaco 109 6
Be careful, or you
won't ride off into the sunset
but into the sun.
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Rondeaus in Juillet
So, it's that time of the month where the next month's prompt comes up and we promote, promote, promote the hell out of it so that you, the watcher and writer, can participate.
So, without further ado, the ProjectDFC desk of all desks (made from CAEK and OREOS, remember) brings you, this July, for a limited time only, a free gift to you and the poetry world:

Well done to all who participated in JJJ. We managed to get two full Rengas to happen, which was way better than last year, and even though they weren't 16-person ones they were still very substantial! This happened even though I forgot (like an idiot) to open the folder for submissions beginning of June (can we say Jo, you are an idiot sometimes )
Now we move from syllabic simplicity to flowery French flamboyance.
Rondeaus in juillet was founded in 2013 and it's here for a comeback. "Juillet" is
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It hurt a lot worse than I thought
I'm out of the situation I was in. It's a huge relief, but at the same time I feel guilty. The truth is, in order to do what I knew was best for myself I had to hurt someone else. Someone I deeply cared about, and still care about. I didn't want to. I hated having to do it. After it was over with and I told this person what I'd done, explaining that I'd had to do it for my own well-being, I burst into tears and cried until I was completely drained. I apologized to her, assured her that I never wanted to hurt her, that I loved her, and that I'd still be there for her, but she still felt back-stabbed. She and I are both going to be reeling from this for a good long while, and it's my sincerest hope that eventually we reconnect and can put it behind us. She has told me she understands my reasoning and that she still loves me, which I take as a good sign. One day at a time.  
I know all this is vague, and I'm sorry for that. Thing is, it's such a long and complicated story and I don't
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Tagging fun
I was tagged by scorchwillow
    1.)  Grab the book nearest to you, turn to page 18, and find line 4.
“Life went on and was there to be lived to the full….”
Republic Commando: Order 66 by Karen Traviss.  I am *such* a nerd.
2.) Stretch your left arm out as far as you can. What can you reach?
3.) What is the last thing you watched on TV?
La, I don’t even know.  We don’t have a TV. 
4.) Without looking guess what time it is?
5.) Now, look at the clock. What is the actual time?
6.) With the exception of the computer, what can you hear?
thunderstorm, cat
7.) When did you last step outside? What were you doing?
Walking to my car after work.  So lame.
8.) Before you started this survey, what did you look at?
Sleeping baby on the monitor
9.) What are you wearing?
Pajama pants (Cpt. America ftw) and a mis-matched t-shirt
10.) Did you dream last night?
Yes, oddly.
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I'm having a moment.
I'm having a moment. This seems to be happening more and more recently and I'm thinking its because next year is my last year of University. 
My moment is, doubt. (followed by slight nausea and a starting headache and pain but a good pain because I just worked out) I have to move back to residence for the school year and I'm not too mad about it now when I think about how much easier it will be to get back and forth to class, I am mad about the whole meal hall thing and how awful the food is and how I'm going to struggle and probably feel really sick after every meal. I think some of my struggle is that anxiety of eating alone and in public. Restaurants are really hard for me, I basically feel sick as soon as I sit down. My residence seems okay though. Its not up hill and I've been in it before. Its basically a brick room with a bed and desk which doesn't make it seem very appealing. Kind of like a jail cell. 
Anyway, my doubt. My major comes with the inevitable fact tha
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My hero by pandapaco My hero :iconpandapaco:pandapaco 139 27 A Rebel Princess by DarthFar A Rebel Princess :icondarthfar:DarthFar 173 14
Is it any wonder I like these people's work? :thumbsup:

Current Creative Status

The Wind in the Rigging!

If you like Patrick O'Brian and his Aubrey-Maturin series, or if you want to be prepared for the below, :giggle: watch this scene from Master and Commander (2003)

'The Nova ghosted along slowly in the night. The dog watch were keeping a steady eye on the stars, though some of them had begun to nod off.

'The quartermaster on watch, Richard Killingbeck, leant over the larboard bulwarks and peered down into the offing. Not much but dark shapes swirling around in the water; probably small sharks or the like. He almost nodded off, almost lost his composure as the captain came up to the decks to see how the weather fared.

'Killingbeck tipped his hat to his higher-up. “Sir,” he said, “I didn’t know you were up…”

'“At ease, Mr. Killingbeck. I did not come to inspect or chastise…” he trailed off a bit here, not explaining why he came up to the weather decks. Narcissus's eyes glazed over, as if his mind were somewhere else, far away from the ocean, far away from this ship, maybe back in England.

'Killingbeck did not dare ask, given his captain’s short temper. But he turned back over the bulwark and gazed presumed-leeward.

'“Our wind may come back within the next day or two,” Narcissus said, making the quartermaster jolt a little, “wouldn’t you say so, Mr. Killingbeck?”

'“Of course, sir,” Killingbeck quickly agreed.

'A long awkward silence passed as Narcissus stared up at the rigging and topsails, wishing, hoping for a wind soon. All these windless days took a toll on his nerves and made him question himself. No wind, maybe no God.

'“Well,” Narcissus said at last, with a slight pause, “carry on, Mr. Killingbeck.”

'Killingbeck tipped his hat yet again. “Sir,” he said, “have a good rest, sir.”

'At this, Narcissus stopped, smiled genuinely, and said, “Thank you, Mr. Killingbeck…”

'A bright sunny morning saw the Novas yet again scrubbing the decks. Francis Midwinter, the bo’sun’s mate, watched on to encourage the men to do their jobs.

'Thomas Shortridge had just finished repairing the sails; the men would soon haul them all up.

'Narcissus enlisted the help of his most trusted advisors and they all agreed that now was the time to hoist sail and keep them all unfurled so as to catch any bit of wind that may come their way.

'Some midshipmen, stationed on the quarterdeck with sextants in hand, were in the process of finding their relative position in accordance with the sun.

'It was then that, despite the loud scraping of the holystones on the deck, a soft luffing made itself heard. The scrubbers stopped scrubbing and looked up at the topgallants. They were flapping! The wind had come back!

'The officers ran about the deck shouting directions at the men. “Square the sails! Up sheets! Haul on that line, boys, smartly now!”

'Every man heaved with all his might, beyond cheerful to be doing so.

'In mid-conversation with a cabin boy, James Mayfield became the target of the bo'sun.

'“You there!" the bo'sun shouted at him. "Stop skylarking and bear a hand! Everybody look alive! Stand by to heave to!”

'So much action surrounded Mayfield that no one noticed him sneak down the fore-hatch to the magazine and the weaponry deposit…'

-- an excerpt from an old work-in-progress (probably won't finish it) called The Adventures of Captain Narcissus

Old Cape Cod

Sun Jul 16, 2017, 7:32 AM
  • Listening to: nature sounds
  • Reading: random stuff, crochet patterns, whatever
  • Watching: nothing at the moment
  • Playing: Snoopy Pop on iPhone
  • Eating: some crackers in a minute
  • Drinking: Water
Soon! I need this vacation like I need air.

Hopefully the change of scenery and relaxing atmosphere will help me feel more ready by the time I get back and have to renew my more vigorous job searching.

Also in the works for after we get back: A new healthy eating study which includes weekly meetings and a phone app to go with the study that helps keep track of things. It's a mindful eating program and I have faith it'll work. I just gotta stay dedicated. I can totally do this!

Maybe I'll write a lot while I'm there, but I also believe that I will be doing a lot of crocheting, sewing, reading, sleeping, and walking. And in actuality, I need it all.

Wish me luck guys! I hope to make a better reappearance in August!

Love you all!

Created at

What kinds of things would you like to see for when I get back from the Cape? 

2 deviants said All Three of the Above Photo Suggestions :D
1 deviant said Beach and Seascape Photos :camera:
1 deviant said Maritime or Seashore Poetry :typerhappy:
1 deviant said All Three of the Above Literature Suggestions :D
1 deviant said Something Completely Different... (Please Comment) :eager:
No deviants said Macro Photos :camera:
No deviants said Seaside Fashion Portraits :camera:
No deviants said Maritime or Seashore Flash Fiction :typerhappy:
No deviants said Maritime or Seashore Longer Short Story Fiction :typerhappy:
No deviants said All of the Above Suggestions :XD:


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Holly Fiore
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States


/ˌsædʒ ɪˈtɛər i ən ɪz əm/
1. a state of being wherein one is eclectic in taste, has perpetual projects in motion (often more than one at a time), and is indefinable by any human standards or laws
"I can't finish anything I start; I must have a case of Sagittarianism."

2. ImagineAppleScruffs's new username.
"Sagittarianism is a great artist and writer on DeviantART."

Hello! Have fun looking at my varied works! :)

-- Holly :peace:


I love DeviantArt! It's a wonderful community where I can find people just as weird as I am. ;)
I like the Beatles. :nod:
I like the Young Ones, a 1980s British comedy TV show.
My art is usually done in Photoshop CS3 and Flash. And my cloth art is done in various fabrics, trims and beads, with needle and thread. No sewing machine.
I try to write every day. I aim to become a part time freelance writer.
I listen to music every day. I can't go through a whole day without it.
I play a multitude of musical instruments, but my favorite is the guitar!
I love to sing.
I also write my own music and lyrics. Now if only I could get them on the radio! ;)
I like feedback on my work, so if you have something to say, please say it!
I believe in angels! :floating:
I love the TV show 'Gunsmoke'. I also like the show 'Bonanza'... and some of its characters: Little Joe Cartwright (played by Michael Landon) and Griff King (Tim Matheson), mainly. :love:

My Tumblr:…

I love Star Wars and Luke Skywalker, but don't get me started on Mara Jade; I seriously don't like her and believe her creation by Timothy Zahn was a huge mistake.
Just sayin'!

Have fun here, guys!

My dA Family:

Twin brother: :iconglompsomethingplz::iconblindsharigan: I luv you, man!
Younger brother: :iconluciferv: Hir oes! :ahoy:
Twin sister: :icontheemptychest: I looooooove youuuu!!! :la:
Younger Sisters: :iconlucy-has-diamonds: :iconcygnus-x-2: :iconjulie090995: :hug: x 3

If you want to be a part of my dA family, just note me as to who you want to be, and I'll add you! :)

Current Residence: Massachusetts USA
Favorite genre of music: Celtic, World, Oldies, Classical, Swing
Favorite photographer: Robert Doisneau, Harry Benson, Ansel Adams, Dezo Hoffman, Edward S Curtis, Linda Eastman McCartney
Favorite style of art: Art Nouveaux, Medieval stylized, popart/psychedelic, pre-raphaelite
Operating System: Windows 10
MP3 player of choice: my phone
Wallpaper of choice: Anything that fits with one of my projects.

Personal Quote: Great friends are amazing blessings. A thousand times over. -- Me


Forgot to let you know about how my home sleep study went. Everything is normal they said. But since I still have daytime fatigue, my primary care doctor wants to pursue this further and see if I need an inpatient sleep study done.
Hopefully they'll be able to help me. I hate feeling simultaneously sapped of energy and too caffeinated. It's mentally draining honestly. And confusing. And it's not good that my body is developing a tolerance to caffeine. I like staying awake during the day though and caffeine is the only thing that helps.
Anyway, I'm doing well right now. My left ear was plugged up this morning to the point I couldn't hear so I went to an Urgent Care near here and they cleaned it out. Good thing they didn't find anything else wrong with it. Haha.

Have a great day!

Land ho! Drop anchor right here so I can stop sweating like a pig. Haha!

Here I am at the Cape. Still unpacking and whatnot but I'm resting. I'm exhausted. Yesterday I felt so sick and like my pulse was elevated. It turned out to be a minor panic attack. So I took Benadryl and an extra one of my anti anxiety meds and rested.

I'm resting again. But because it's a little hot and humid here.

Although I'm angry because some butthole at a library book sale reported to the librarian that we left our dog in the car (in the parking lot which had no shade in sight because they cut all the goddamn trees down) and grossly underexaggerated the amount we opened the windows (almost halfway down with more than enough air to breathe but not so wide that she might jump out the car and get hit by a passing car, and we hadn't been in the building more than 3 minutes, and it wasn't that hot and the sky was overcast) and the worst part was the attitude of the librarian; she shouted "who owns a green vw bug!"

My dad went up and said: "Huh? That's mine."

She then complained about us leaving the dog in the car.
And my dad replied: "She just hates it when she can't see where we went."

Then the librarian retorted: "Well she would hate it a lot more if she was dead! Go take care of her!"

My dad walked out and he gave me the book he picked up which I paid for and he later reported that the car wasn't even hot.

This pisses me off. People need to mind their own business. We love Patches. If we thought she would get too hot or something, we wouldn't have left her out there like that.

I paid for our books and left right away. I just wanted to leave I was so angry.

Don't pretend to care about my dog you cocksucker! You don't know her and how hardy she is. You don't know that we gave her plenty of water before we left her in there. You don't know how short a time we've been gone from the car.
Stop "caring"! You just want an excuse to tattle on someone. Go pick on someone else!

These people obviously were not dog owners. Tell me where we're supposed to put our dog when our car is still full of luggage and you have no f***ing shade trees in your parking lot, and it's cloudy out and non-service dogs aren't allowed in public buildings!

It's like when total strangers pretend to care about your weight because it's unhealthy. Really? That's brand new information. Are you my doctor? No? Well f*** off and stop acting like you care about me. All you want is to stop seeing fat people. Either look the other way, pluck your eyes out of your skull, or ignore it. You're not the fat one nor is it your family member. Mind your business!

In any case, I'm okay. I wonder that any of you had any similar experiences.

Sleep, Beach, Repeat.

Sorry about not being on in a long while. I've been fighting with myself and my time and my health. I've gained weight unfortunately, and I haven't been sleeping well, and the swimsuit I ordered online looked awful on me, and I think I might have pre-diabetes, my BF doesn't believe I deserve a vacation because of my job situation (having had to be taken off of the last job due to scheduling conflicts) and that I "haven't worked hard enough" this year to go on vacation, and I believe my life sucks, my talents are wasted and useless because the only thing I have going for me is my creativity and even that has been in a particular slump lately, I had a home sleep study done Wednesday night and had to return the device to the medical center by 9 the next morning, it's Friday and it doesn't feel like it, and I'm just upset about everything in general because I feel like a huge square peg being forced into a tiny ass round hole. I'm going again to the Cape next Saturday, but I have a bad feeling about it because it's been rainy a lot here and the sky is gloomy and darkish and I feel depressed even though I don't need to. Also, I should be packing for the Cape right now, but I've been putting it off and stuff. I'm just too lazy to do stuff. As Christian says, "I feel lard-like." Don't wanna move or do anything because my mind exhausts me with stupid invasive thoughts. I hope things clear up soon and that my mood improves, and that I don't really have pre-diabetes or whatever, or sleep apnea, or anything detrimental to my physical and mental health.
Long ass run-on sentence aside, I just want the misery to stop and whatnot. I want the stinging tears to go away. I want the happy to come back. I want to practice what I preach. I want things to make sense to me again.
I hate feeling like a loser; makes me confused as to how the heck I can reverse the feeling. I get lost in my own mind, so I guess I'm a loser because I lost myself? Not sure. Sometimes I wish suicide actually was painless (to me, to others around me, etc) so that nothing and no one would be affected by my loss. But there's so much I have to do still. So many stories to write, to read, so many things to learn. And so little time to prove to myself that I'm supposed to stand out, and successfully at that, and be known for being good, and nice, and kind, and funny, and helpful, etc... There's so much to do, but I don't know how much longer I can stand the internal suffering and the external negative stimuli that the rest of the world has been thrusting onto my (and a lot of people's) plate(s) and forcing us to choke on.
TL;DR - Sometimes I wish I could die because I suffer, but there's too much to do still, so I can't die yet. Not now. Not until I'm good and ready and my time has truly come and I am old but in a better state of mind than I am currently. I'm not thinking straight right now. Don't worry about me. I'll be okay like always, I just needed to get this off my chest.

Got a job last week after a successful interview.
Accepted the position but had to pull out at the last second due to scheduling conflicts and certain self-destruction should those conflicts come to pass.
So, unfortunately, jobless again.
But I'm okay because right now I'm doing something that's extremely important to me.
Writing. My passion(s).
I also feel relieved actually because I wanted A job, but not THAT job. Not a job I'd feel trapped in. I didn't want to live with regrets. Hopefully, though, I'll find a more fitting job that allows for more flexibility to actually go to my therapist appointments. And use a particular healthy eating program to help me lose weight and change my eating habits into healthy lifestyle habits.
So, that's that for now. But I'm free per the nonce to do something I love that counts for everything that was ever important to me. Communicating. Writing. Helping people not feel alone. Listening and offering.
I can do that. I can definitely do that.
Hey, did you hear the one about the Ancient Egyptian weather goddess?
Yeah, she was a Tefnut to crack!
Icon - Oh You Dog 



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JamesSKeane Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  New Deviant Professional General Artist

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Sagittarianism Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D

KiranDrawss Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017
Thank you so much for the random points :heart: I really appreciate it!
Sagittarianism Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! :)

FrodoK Featured By Owner May 29, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
It's nice. Thank you very much
Sagittarianism Featured By Owner May 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Keep up the awesome artwork! :)

Ellygator Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for all your faves!
Sagittarianism Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! I love your art; you're talented! :)

DC-26 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017
Thanks for your interest in my writing :)
Sagittarianism Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course! Your writing is fantastic! I look forward to reading more, especially on First Impressions. The first line of the first chapter was definitely a successful hook. You should publish with Amazon when you're completely done with it and then take it off DeviantArt to encourage people to buy the book. I'd certainly buy it. And if you're worried about publishing with Amazon, know this, (unless you have already worked with them, then you are probably not worried), a lot of emerging authors swear by Amazon because it's cheap and/or free and you get to design it however you want. And no agent will have the opportunity to suggest that you not put your real name on it. (I've heard of this happening with agents picking big name publishers like Random House, Tachyon, Simon & Schuster, and Del Rey. One cannot always listen to an agent.) Anyway, hopefully I'll be writing more too and we can comment and give each other constructive criticism; I'd definitely appreciate your advice and suggestions.
Have a fabulous weekend. :)

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