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When my mind is pondering
I like to go wandering
But my clothes need laundering…
And yet I don’t care.
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In my room I’m thinking ‘bout
Someone I can’t do without
Though apart I have no doubt
We’re a perfect pair!
When my mind is pondering
I like to go wandering
But my clothes need laundering…
And yet I don’t care.
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In my room I’m thinking ‘bout
Someone I can’t do without
Though apart I have no doubt
We’re a perfect pair!
This is a Dodoitsu for 
's Jubilant Japanese June is Coming Soon to You!
This form: "The Dodoitsu is a folk song form and it is primarily about love or humour. It features 4 lines of 7,7,7,5 syllables respectively."
I called mine Rom-Com, because it's kind of both humorous and about love.
's Jubilant Japanese June is Coming Soon to You!This form: "The Dodoitsu is a folk song form and it is primarily about love or humour. It features 4 lines of 7,7,7,5 syllables respectively."
I called mine Rom-Com, because it's kind of both humorous and about love.
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What a fun little poem! I love how it bounces in the mouth 